Please give me suggestions for
1. the big title " i was born to be educated"
It was originally "i was not born to be a sex slave" due to suggestions i changed it,
however, i am still looking for a title that would grab people's attention more...
maybe titles such as "GIVE ME A CHANCE! EDUCATE ME"
or "HELP ME BY EDUCATING ME!"
.... any suggestions is welcomed!
2. general poster design suggestions.... is there anything you guys think i should add to spice the poster up? my topic is so serious i didn't want to overdo the poster...but i feel like the poster is almost too plain?
THANKS SO MUCH!
Angela
2 comments:
Hello Angela:
A quick reply
This seems like a very rushed board. You have thrown in everything but they do not make sense as a whole. Follow what Patty showed in class for inclusion.
• Problem: it is confusing what you are saying- shouldn’t it be-‘ Poverty, lack of education desperation and local superstitious customs has led to sale of underage children in Cambodia – for the sex market in Taiwan.’
• Hypo…: Empowering Cambodian children with access to education will reduce the number of trafficked underage young victims.
• Graphically align box of children images* with the text blocks of Problem and Hypothesis and not leave them ragged!
Perhaps show the desperate conditions in Cambodia – families, environment rather than the children alone
• on story inconsistent use of ‘moma or momma’ in Asia isn’t it mama????
Have images of children that bands across board -??
• Possible Titles:
- I deserve a better future!
- I am a child, not a sex slave! (Yes, I know similar to your original statement, but…)
- Is my future safe?
I don’t know –you make the decision.
• Have images of children that cuts across board -??
• the statistics to left are strong but badly laid out-numbers are aligned left and description should also be aligned rather than have a jagged order.
• the 4-columns are confusing- where are the flags? –they are such a strong visual element if accompanied by name of country
-Maybe a sub title here –‘The Asian Sex Trade.’
-Then clean up the column headers and descriptors below – forget ages 25 they are not children!!!-yeah!?
Please look at this block of information – they are highly disorganized and will only confuse.
• the sketches look very WEAK – because they are line drawings- give some shadow for presence, and they are also too SMALL!
Please take a step back and look at the overall balance and do not allow indifferent font scale to reduce impact. Consider alignments. Check language.
thanks Len,
an updated board will be up when it's done...
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