After presenting, the feedback I received was that there was too much information about the process of making wine, which made it difficult to follow. Therefore confusing my audience so the the conversation was focused more about how the wine was made instead of what my concept was. As a result for my new board or during my presentation I need to expand on my concept and solutions instead. For this week I am going to focus on how to get my message across and generally summarize the information that they audience needs to know in order to understand my concepts.
3 comments:
Hi Vanessa,
It looks like you are floundering a bit, after having settled on what seems like a very promising topic. the discussion about wine making and the impact of climate change on that process is interesting, but it may not interest consumers as much as you think. It may be hard to make a consumer product that gets across this complex story; at the same time, it is also hard to imagine developing a product that could be used in the wine-making process that could improve yield or quality by introducing additives in a new way, or creating some new kind of container that would naturally affect wine during the aging process to improve results. If you were to do something like that, you wouldn't be held to the standard of actually having to prove that it would work. It would be enough to come up with an amazingly clever and beautiful object that would be meant to be used in a process that you explain, but (of course) don't actually build. Does this make sense?
steven
Hey Vanessa,
did you have a chance to check out Mondovino?
I think it would really help your project.
Here is a netflix link.
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