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This is such a bland, boring presentation that is un-attractive. You have to inject your belief in the ‘natural’, the controlled and the personalized. Project the belief that you have and utilize imagery that represents your intent. As it is it’s tragically sophomoric and non-convincing and do a spell-check.
We have requested that you post same to be able to get the scrutiny of your peers and faculty so that you can be challenged on the state of your progress. Please re-visit your premise, define what DIY Corp. is and also prepare for user testing that will inform you on the validity and strength of your direction.
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